Tomato

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Wandi Riyadi
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Tomato

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Greetings everyone,

My name is Wandi Riyadi, here is my latest work.
All advice and critiques are very welcome, so i can make a better pipe.

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Thank you for looking.
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Re: Tomato

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Can you post pictures with a higher resolution? It's hard to make out details as is.


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Re: Tomato

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Actually it was big resolution, due to the rule about posting image then i resized to 800x600 .. may i post the big one?
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You can post them as 800x600. They are linked as 150x200 at the moment. Perhaps you linked the thumbnails?


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Re: Tomato

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I try other image hosting, hope this work well :banghead:

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Re: Tomato

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The shape is nice. Perhaps a bit too much bowl just above the shank, but it's not too bad. The stem looks chubby and the button is really tall. Try to shoot for a stem thickness of 4mm or thinner and a button height of not much more than 6mm. Also, the saddle is a little sharp for the organic shape of the bowl.

Overall, not too bad. Now make another!


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Wandi Riyadi
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Re: Tomato

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Yes i do agree about the stem and the bowl,.
" the saddle is a little sharp" did you mean the saddle angle?
just a little something miss match that i cant find in this pipe. Know i now how to make a better one, thank you very much :D
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Re: Tomato

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Not too bad. Just btw, how many have you made so far?
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Re: Tomato

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Thank you, i have made about 40 briar pipes and about 30 hardwood pipes before.
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