First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Want to show you work to the world? Want a place to post photos of your work and solicit the opinions of those that have gone before you? Post your work here.
Post Reply
User avatar
Ratimus
Posts: 337
Joined: Mon Jan 20, 2014 12:55 pm

First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by Ratimus »

Well, here goes nothing. I already have a list of imperfections that bug me about this. Care to add to it? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Ryan Richardson
R2 Pipes/Ryan's Luxury Goods
______________________________________
"You can't convince a stupid person that what he's doing is stupid, because the stupidness inside him is telling him that it's smart"
wdteipen
Posts: 2817
Joined: Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:05 pm

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by wdteipen »

I like it a lot but you need to put a bend in the stem.
Wayne Teipen
Teipen Handmade Briar Pipes
http://www.teipenpipes.com
JMG
Posts: 1185
Joined: Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:28 pm
Location: Mississippi

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by JMG »

+1 to what Wayne said. Nice work with the shank cap.
"No reserves, no retreats, no regrets"

"When you're dumb...you've got to be tough." - my dad
User avatar
Ratimus
Posts: 337
Joined: Mon Jan 20, 2014 12:55 pm

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by Ratimus »

Thanks.
wdteipen wrote:...you need to put a bend in the stem.
Duly noted. I was rebelling against overly bent churchwardens and it looks like I kept it a little too subtle.
Ryan Richardson
R2 Pipes/Ryan's Luxury Goods
______________________________________
"You can't convince a stupid person that what he's doing is stupid, because the stupidness inside him is telling him that it's smart"
User avatar
WCannoy
Posts: 542
Joined: Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:58 pm
Location: Lakeland, Florida
Contact:

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by WCannoy »

I like the shape of the stummel, and it works very well as a churchwarden. It's nice. I'd smoke it!

Ditto on the stem bending...
BrianMadsen
Posts: 117
Joined: Thu Jan 30, 2014 10:39 am

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by BrianMadsen »

I also wote yes for stem bending, but also: re-size your pictures! This can easily be done in paint or other "fancy" programs :)

I'm not really digging that type of rustication, but the nickel(?) band and the beveled rim looks great! Keep it up :)
wdteipen
Posts: 2817
Joined: Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:05 pm

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by wdteipen »

A good rule of thumb is to bend your stems so that the bit is slightly less than parallel to the top of the bowl.
Wayne Teipen
Teipen Handmade Briar Pipes
http://www.teipenpipes.com
User avatar
Literaryworkshop
Posts: 275
Joined: Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:57 pm
Location: Alabama Gulf Coast
Contact:

Re: First ever post for critique: churchwarden apple.

Post by Literaryworkshop »

What Wayne said about the bend.

Yes, a lot of CWs are over-bent. You want a nice, gentle bend rather than a "crook." A curved form of some kind will help you do this. I've used a trash can lid successfully.

Otherwise, I think it's well done. I'm not a fan of most rustications, but the overall shape and the use of the cap is very pleasing to the eye.
- Steve S.
Post Reply