Autograph - "Whale" R.Wozniak

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Autograph - "Whale" R.Wozniak

Post by R.Wozniak »

Hello. I don't write a lot of time. I had to practice :D What I can doing better?
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The stem is too short for the pipe. I would expect it to be at least 1.5x longer to make the shape work. Also. It looks like the bend in the stem is a bit abrupt. That is likely due to the shortness of the stem.
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great website, I like your work
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Post by The Smoking Yeti »

As far as shaping of the stummel goes- good job- from the angles you posted, it looks like an attractive, organically curving pipe. As far as the stem goes, I recommend tying the stem's length to another measurement on the pipe. In this instance, I'd recommend the widest diameter of the bowl(front-back). That length would be almost the same as the shank length, which would give a nice visual repetition to the design.

Also, when your shank is flaring outward, a tapered stem usually is not the best option. You would be better off with some sort of saddle stem- as is, it makes the stem look too bulky.
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