I think it's a nice pipe over all, and nice work with the churchwarden stem, those suckers are a bi*ch to make. The finish looks good, especially on the stem (from what I can see on the photos).
I would also do something about the rim, probably round of the inner edge of the rim so the chamber edge is a bit rounder, otherwise it's really easy to burn the edge when lighting the pipe (in my experience). I would also try to keep the outer edge of the rim more crisp and defined, because now it looks as though it's slightly rounded over.
And sand out the chamber, unless is is some kind of bowl coating, I can't really tell from the pics.
That's all I've got at the moment!
Keep up the good job!
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