Generally speaking, you don't want the bottom of the bowl to be lower than the bottom of the shank on a straight pipe. I'd make that a really straight line. Also, you want a lot more definition between shank and bowl. Keep working at it!
On the up side, I think it's really cool that you used that old pic of Rad Davis as the background for the first image. I didn't know he likes apples.
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