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I know the shape is nothing intriquit, but it is one that I've never tried before. I'm a bit conflicted about the shank side of the bowl... I would have like to seen the bowl angled in a bit more on that side but had trouble with the bowl/shank junction in my mind- not really being able to think of an elegant way to intersect the two. Because it seemed like an unfixable move I decided to hold off for now and will attempt it when I'm not spending my weekends with one pipe show in mind.
Not a bad shape at all, but it seems as though it can't decide whether or not it wants to be canted.
Todd
I think that's the impression given by that side of the bowl (at least that's what I think)... in a 3-d world I think it looks very canted (for a rhodesian), which is what I was going for. but in a side profile....
Do you think that angle that I'm referencing causes this?
Last edited by bscofield on Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
The only thing that sticks out to my eye on that pipe is the shank/stem junction. The pipes in my collection all have a small ring at least of smooth material before either the sandblast or rusticated surface begins. This allows a nicer looking transition, with no sharp edge to the stem showing.
I edited the above post, after Todd's comment, but wanted to post it down here to make sure it was seen:
Todd (or anyone else) do you think that if the wall of the bowl on the shank-side was angled further in towards the bottom that it would change the impression of the 'not canted/not straight' appearance?
ckr wrote:Nice pipe Ben and I think "yes", you are right.
I gotta agree. Note that I LOVE this pipe, but there does need to be more of an indentation at the shank/bowl junction to get the lines to that "damn, that's so pretty I could cry" stage.
I'm by no means a pipe fundi (yet ) but IMO you lost most of the definition at the bowl/shank junction because of the rustication. It might look more "right" if that is better defined.
On the other hand it might also look better with a more acute angle at the bowl/shank connection. I think the angle of the rim in relation to the shank is enough to give an impression that it is canted.
I also think that if what I said is not making any sense to anybody I might be looking like a fool.
Shape looks good for me but it seems it's too "hairy".
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